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Thursday, April 4, 2013

Naturally Perfect

This is my second assignment from my advanced creative writing class. It is supposed to be a completed short story.

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Rachel Lane's office had cream plushy floors that sank with each step and pure white walls marred by pictures of smiling pudgy babies, their rosy cheeks and bright glinting eyes full of vibrancy. She sat in her tall backed rolling chair looking as if its black leather swallowed her petite frame as she leaned over with her chin propped up on her hand, elbow resting on the mahogany desk. One crossed legs in her short brown skirt jittered, the high-heeled shoe dangling on by her toes swayed with the movement. Her brown suit coat rested on the arm of her chair and her buttercup blouse's sleeves were rolled up as she flicked the black stylist against the screen of the tablet.
The screen flashed with colors, sounds muted as the score rose in the upper right corner. Her gray eyes were focused on the screen but she kept thinking, One more. One more client left and then I can leave.
For months she had planned this trip to Paris, picking the time of the year so the weather was ideal. Her plane ticket was paid for, with the hotel and events planned. And her luggage was waiting for her in the trunk of her Ferrari Spyder. All that was left was her and the last clients of the day, keeping her from reaching her plane on time. Perhaps it had not been smart for her to buy plane tickets so close to closing time but she hadn't once thought the wiser because no one was ever late to these meetings.
Not until now at least.
If I miss my flight because some inconsiderate nobodies-
A piercing beep made her jerk, making her miss the ball on the screen. The tablet darkened with the words Game Over flaring on the screen. Her pretty face that had already been tightened into a frown darkened as she glowered at the phone contraption to the side of her desk that was flashing red next to the text Secretary. The stylist to her tablet hit the screen with angry taps as she closed out of the game and brought up the file of the clientele. She set the stylist on the desk next to the papers she would need and rose, pushing the button in the same motion as she rolled down her blouse sleeves.
"Yes?"
"Rachel, the couple is-" her secretary started happily.
"Lane, call me Ms Lane," she snapped at the woman, "This is a profession workplace, Mrs Jennings, please do not force me to write another citation."
There was a pause on the other end as Rachel grabbed her suit coat and swept her arms in each sleeve before buttoning it. The woman murmured, "Uh, yes... sorry, Ms Lane."
"What is it, Mrs Jennings?"
"The Wellington's are here for their meeting."
Taking out a compact mirror from the drawers to her desk she looked over her make-up and blonde hair pulled back into a bun. "About time, send them in."
The connection severed as she put the compact away and sat back down in the chair, skimming over the files in her tablet for the couple. She didn't have to wait long when a knock sounded at her door. Calling them in, she didn't look up as she offered them to sit down. Yes, she knew she was supposed to shake their hands and be bubbly. Perfect. But they were late! No one was ever late to meetings like these. She made them sit there, fidgeting as they waited for her to speak. Finally her own curiosity at who this couple that showed up overdue to this joyful event was got to her and she looked up.
The couple looked plain. Not ugly or wrong. But at the same time nothing of real interest popped out at Rachel as she studied them. The wife's eyes were pinched at the side with anxiousness and excitement, like every other wife Rachel saw sitting in the chairs before her desk. The husband tried to smile only to rub his palms on his gray suit pants. Like all that made appointments with her they were dressed nicely and presented their best to her. But in those seconds all she saw were homely people trying too hard to be something they were not: Rich.
Rachel kept the smile on her lips, not letting them see that she knew their secret as she folded her fingers together on the desk. "Welcome to Naturally Perfect, thank you for choosing our company for this next step to your family. Have you settled on a package?"
The couple's faces blanked before looking at each other with uncertainty. Her smile slipped with frustration but only for a moment as she opened a drawer and drew out the laminated paper that listed all of the packages. She pushed her tablet and the other papers aside and set it down before them. Normally all couples had looked up a plethora of information online, knowing what they wanted long before this meeting. At this rate she wasn't going to make that plane.
"The most basic package covers all genetic diseases and allows you to choose three traits." She pointed to the top of the list and surprisingly they didn't lean over to read the laminated paper. "Whether that be boy or a girl. Base ranges for eye color or hair color. Of course if you want more exact colors that will cost more."
The wife shook her head. "We don't want that."
Puzzled, Rachel stared at both of them with a small frown. Her finger slid down the list. "Well, the next package goes up in-"
Again, they exchanged nervous looks as Mr Wellington said, "No, we don't want a package."
He reached out for his wife's hand and she took it, both squeezing as Mrs Wellington added, "We picked Naturally Perfect because you were the only company to allow us to do it the old way. You know, randomly without genetic altering."
Rachel backed away from the laminate paper. When was the last time anyone wanted to have a child the old way? Not since she had been working here and that was more than five years now! And even through the whispers she heard from other "child designers", she had not heard of something like this happening for over a decade now. Swallowing she nodded, her mind unable to process what was happening as she searched the piles of paper for that once unimportant piece that would allow the couple to have what they wanted: an unaltered child.
The wife continued, "We know that we will be in charge of any disease or ill effects this may have on the child and are willing to face it."
Again she could only nod, face pale and body shaking as she withdrew the needed paper from the rest. "A-As long as y-you know this, Mrs Wellington... Mr Wellington..." Rachel glanced at him and he smiled, no longer anxious.
It took ten minutes to finish up with the clients before she fled her office, making it to the terminal on time. However, she missed the plane in her haste, forgetting the ticket in her office desk.

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